Name 14/12/15(Mon)13:48 No.5147
As usual, you have some wonderful character moments wrapped into some clever scripting, but this whole installment felt quite off. Maybe just because you took some time in between this one and the previous chapter, but the characters don't feel quite as sharp. Obviously, the characters will change in your universe versus the original, but Mari here barely resembles her Rebuild characterization. She has the daring certainly, but what always struck me about her character was just how laid-back she often was in combat situations.